Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Zeitgeist Ein

Prague 1989
The thunderstorm lashed the rain under the roof of the platform and peppered us with liquid shrapnel. I pulled her closer to me and paid the rain no heed as I buried my face in her sunshine hair. With my eyes closed I etched the moment in my mind and prayed to any passing deity to freeze us in this moment for eternity. My train was leaving in minutes and I didn't want to leave. The Czechoslovak Socialist Republic border police had different ideas though and there was no question of me overstaying my visa.

Reluctantly I opened my eyes and started the clock again. Katya still kept her eyes closed for another moment. They were brilliant blue and pulled the breath out of me every day. She literally shone and especially so when compared to my green/brown/khaki nondescript. No-one noticed me when we walked down the street.

I pressed the thin wad of korun into her hand. I wouldn't have been able to change it back into hard currency anyway and it would have been of no use to me in the DDR. East German Grenzpolizei wanted western currency for their bribes. Some of the Berlin veterans back home had shit me right up with their tales of attempting to bribe the wrong guard at the frontier. Thousands of East Germans were voting with their feet that summer and fleeing to Czechoslovakia and Hungary and on to West Germany. I couldn't imagine they'd give a rat's arse about me taking the train from Prague to East Berlin even if there weren't many other Westerners in evidence. The map of Europe was a lot different in those days.

A doom laden roll of thunder underscored the tableau. I closed my eyes again and leaned in to kiss her for the last time. A bolt of lightning hiss-cracked across the sky and a tiny bit of my heart did not restart when the shock of it passed.

8 comments:

Jimmy Bastard said...

You left me wanting to read more... very nicely written Dev.

Bogie said...

Beautiful Devin, what is it about trains stations (and airports too)? These partings are so sad but on reflection, so delicate and precious. “You must remember this … …” I know, I know, it’s a different scene, but I know that you know that I loves the film. Were you wearing a trench coat and did you call her baby, even once? You big ol juicy romantic, Devin.

Meadow said...

More, please.

The Hangar Queen said...

Jimmy,
Thank you. I might be able to oblige you there.

Bogie,
Trench coats (or the people in them)in that time and place were to be avoided. I'll happily sign the romantic confession though.

Meadow,
I'm not sure if I can yet.It took 20 years to get this far.

Kim Ayres said...

Brief Encounter all over again...

conortje said...

So atmospheric, I love your writing HQ

savannah said...

beautiful, sugar. the days/those days, i'm glad to remember mine most of the time. xoxo

mapstew said...

'A by de kid', good stuff DOES come out of Limerick. Great story.